Tuesday, 24 September 2013
100 word challenge week 4
"I just want to get out of here!" booms my best friend Jennie.
"Were almost done Jennie." I respond as we approach the final sculpture of our lame tour in Paris.When I see it I'm immediately interested. I walk closer while everyone wonders off to look at a sculpture of a dead pig. When I get closer I see intricate details.I press my hand against the cold wood. All of a sudden my whole body is frozen. Finally it releases its iron grip.I look around to see jennie yell, "I just want to get out of here!"
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A very enjoyable story indeed. I did notice one very tiny mistake, you wrote were instead of we're. I loved the language and description you used. Great story!
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