I sat in the plane. I’m on my way to my Aunt Candace’s house
in Victoria British Columbia, while my parents are on a trip to Hong-Kong for
some kind of study. My aunt’s back yard is a forest. I’m almost there. Just one
hour then I’m there so I will sleep. I woke up and we are just landing, I
collect my stuff and I left the plane. I say hi to my aunt and run to the
forest when I see a beautiful stone staircase. I climbed to the top and I see a
house. I go inside.
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Hello Bailey,
ReplyDeleteWell done for entering this week's 100 word challenge. You have used very accurate punctuation including commas. You have managed to fit a lot of story into your 100 words.
Next time think about including some more exciting vocabulary..
Keep up the good work.
Ms Woodgate (Team 100WC)UK